Friday, February 25, 2011

Flash Friday Week # 28

Amy C over at Romance Book Wyrm and Dottie over at Tink's Place
have come up with the idea for a Monday Morning Flash Fiction challenge. Each Monday a new picture prompt will be posted and if you choose to participate - you post your story on Friday - 350 words, give or take. 

And here is picture prompt #28:

I Can't Believe It Ended This Way
By: Brenda Sessoms

Keelee Tualla princess of the kingdom of Wyvia, sits alone in the breva, the mystical forrest which surrounds her father's kingdom. She silently weeps afraid if she gives in to the anguish and  betrayal she feels she will never survive. Survive she must. She has to bury her beloved father, the King of Wyvia,rescue her younger sister, and kill her bastard brother Jakra.

If she had not been waylaid on her journey from the gathering, which her father insisted she attend,by a pompous ass who refused to accept no until she was forced to show him what it felt to receive a set of blue balls,she would have been there to prevent what took place.

Her father could never believe Jakra meant him any harm. Keelee knew what hatred lurked behind his charm and fake smiles. She was also aware of the abnormal desires he held for her sister ignoring the fact they shared the same father.

Keelee had watched as his mother a wicked sorcerss had twisted him into the cruel and evil person he had become.

Keelee was the princess of her people, an ancient race descended from a sacred bird so beautiful and majestic people once worshipped it. Her fathers line was the only ones left who still bore the feathers of the bird and the ability to fly.

Little did Jakra know, his whereabouts were no secret to her  and within two days time he would be dead.

She laid her father to rest without a funeral but time was of the essence. As soon as she gave instructions to her most trusted men she took to the air.

She found him exactly where she knew she would.He was so arrogant he had left no guards and had passed out in a drunken stupor.

She was to late to prevent the rape of her sister but for that he would die fully awake and very slowly.

She removed her sister binds and carried her to safety,ensuring her she would return soon.

She returned to Jakra and waited for him to awaken,when  he did she kept her promise to herself he died very slowly.
She took cold determined pleasure in his screams as she slowly ripped him to pieces.....

The End

Word Count: 402



Michelle Greathouse said...


I like this one a lot. :) Well done.


Dottie (Tink's Place) said...

Hi B!

Oh, very nicely done! Yay! So happy her brother met his well deserved end!! Now, she can rightfully take her father's place, using his rule as her guide.

Dottie :)